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the angels dance so gracefully
on their white clouds of puff
it is done so peacefully
the do not look at all tough
they swirl,dance and spin
to the sound of the billowy wind
they are so light, they are silenter than the drop of a pin
they seem so determined
the angels dance so gracefully
on their white clouds of puff
it send me to sleep peacefully
the dance of the angels
after the battles we fought
it helps me untangle
my messed up thoughts
- by lovelovehatehatexx |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/18/2009 |
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- Title: dance of angels
- Artist: lovelovehatehatexx
- Description: a short poem about angels
- Date: 12/18/2009
- Tags: dance angels
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Comments (1 Comments)
- JaejoongKimforever - 12/30/2009
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in the first stanza the last sentence should read "they do not look at all tough"
silenter, i believe is not a word..just use quieter
overall, nothing amazing
meaning nothing that original.
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