i wish

• Artist: Yutoma
• Description: its about my fathers death
• Date: 10/17/2009
• Tags: wish death father gone

wish i could go back in time
i wish you were still alive
i wish i could see your face
i wish you didnt die at that time
i wish on a star
i wish on a stone
i wish i wasnt all alone
some wishs come true
some wishs dont
i wish to be with you
that wish will come true
when i die i will be with you


.....rest in peice my father

Comments

[Farrenlock]

I'm sorry for your loss. It's hard loosing someone whose close. sad
Your poem is written well, but again there's a few grammar mistakes.

[DDrox316]

that is so sad I'm so so sorry. I don't know what I'd do without my dad. He's away a lot because he's in the military, but at least I know he's alive you know? like, even though he's gone now, it'd be a lot different if I knew he was gone forever... sad
*note: please change the "wishs" to "wishes" sorry, I'm a grammar freak

[iTz Thundah]

That's sad...Im sorry that happend to you.