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I travel in silence not expressing feelings,
But you know well that I carry you in here.
When night falls and its the time to go,
I see your silhouette, away from me.
A deep feeling takes over my body
And I feel that if I’m not with you I am dead…
Sadness takes over my mind and my soul,
Because only by your side I find happiness.
But I think eternal and I get lost in oblivion….
The wind caresses me and I remember your hands.
The night breeze makes me think of your lips,
The brightness of the moon is equal to your eyes,
I know that without you, I am just a wreck.
I swear I lose track when you're not beside me.
The wind tells me your name at every moment.
The night breeze reminds me how far away you are.
When I'm with you, every day is joy.
But far from you, I plunge into the agony….
I awake at dawn and hug a ******** pillow
Wishing you were here to share my bed.
I swear I shudder when you're not with me.
I wouldn’t care if death would to cross my path.
Just being with you I swear I would be resurrected…
Just to be by your side the rest of my life.
Eres lo mejor que en mi vida ha pasado……
- by Supermonstar |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/03/2009 |
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- Title: Eres lo mejor
- Artist: Supermonstar
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Description:
The poem is in english just the tittle in spanish.
Writen for my gf which broke my heart the day I was going to give this to her.
Now.. idk I just felt like I had to show it to someone. - Date: 09/03/2009
- Tags: eres love
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Comments (2 Comments)
- KershaFangs - 09/03/2009
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"You are the best thing that has happened in my life."
It chills me your connections of life, death, and this girl. Such depression and misery should not be so bluntly stated. It feels dependent, longing, reaching for some higher being to achieve happiness you only know when around them. Do I sound harsh? Well the subject is grim.
The quality of the poem seems drowned out in personal issues and so, poetic license is lost. I advise studying poetic devices. - Report As Spam