Fog

• Artist: Red Dragon Knight 2010
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• Date: 08/04/2009
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As i look around me,
I see that I cannot see,
All that i see
Is a fog, suffocating me.
Lost in this fog,
Lost without you,
Not knowing where I am
Or what to do.
I cannot find you.
I cannot see you,
I cannot hear you,
I cannot find you.
i whisper your name
hoping for a reply,
I hear nothing,
So again I try.
I call your name,
But hear naught still,
Again I call,
And find you, I will.
i yell your name,
I must find you,
I will yell your name
Until i do.
I scream your name
With all my might,
I cry for you
And the fog clears.

Comments

[o-Hoshi-chan-o]

If u see u cannot see how u see the fog D confused even if its
metaphorical you should use another verb that would fit better (:

[Temper-Mental247]

thats good real good i say just a lil more work but its awesome 5/5 if ya don't mind could you take a peek at my writing?