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The vastness of your beauty cannot be compared
How long your arms go, across a lake, across a field
I feel like I’m in a dream, is this false? Or are you real?
I lay down in the grass at the start of your foundation
To look up and gaze at the legacy, beauty’s creation
When the wind whispers to you, its soft seductive tone
You move to the song, and gracefully geisha strong
Pale white skin to your cousin’s bright pink
But I prefer your medium, the pale blushing pink
But if the music is too fast, and you cannot keep up
You break into pieces, blushing hard, but all the same
One by one falling down
You’d think it was snowing in May
I inhale your perfume, so strong, yet so sweet
I too blush at the thought of being like this, being so meek
Across the globe, across the nation, we marvel at this sweet sensation
No city, none in the world, every building will crumble at your presence
And even in the country, all you do is enhance the essence
When the time of season nestles upon the land
Your beauty explodes and infects the hills one by one
The mountains, the towns, sick with the white that blooms upon the trees
Venus and Aphrodite in envious green
of your gift to outshine them, how can this happen? How can it be?
You are called many names, but one word fades it all
Sakura, Sakura, let your cherry blossoms fall.
- by x blossoming-innocence x |
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- | Submitted on 08/03/2009 |
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- Title: ~Sakura~
- Artist: x blossoming-innocence x
- Description: This is my descrption of how I view cherry blossoms, these (besides the rose) are my favorite flowers! Anyways, its a free verse (with some rhymes) I am open to any type of critique.
- Date: 08/03/2009
- Tags: sakura
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Atomic Rock - 08/05/2009
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I really love it. Really.
You have a great way of capturing the beauty of dance and elegance. I love it. smile - Report As Spam
- Rogelio-CP_64 - 08/04/2009
- Wow. Such beauty hidden in this language. If one were to read quickly you would miss out on the tender words. Wow it was amazing. I was left speachless. Wish my poems were this good.
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