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I sit in my room.
I look at my rose.
It reminds me of myself, aging until im falling apart.
Its bloodred petals have lost their color,
The brilliant glow radiates no more.
And one petal, so fragile.
Looks like its about to fall.
Slowly, carefully it seperates,
Falling swiftly to the ground.
Never to glow bloodred again.
- by Missi Kitti |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/30/2009 |
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- Title: The rose petal drops
- Artist: Missi Kitti
- Description: first poem ever!
- Date: 07/30/2009
- Tags: rose life death
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Comments (2 Comments)
- seven_Sin_incarnate - 02/19/2010
- no way thats your first poem, and if it is kudos to you. its really great. freeverse is an interesting thing to start off with btw, but you pulled it off wonderfully.
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- Lilithmae - 08/03/2009
- It's good writing;I like it. You should write more. 5/5
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