Mirror

• Artist: Discuit
• Description:
  >.< I wrote this when I was upset a little while ago, it had more to it but I wanted it to make since and the last bit didn't
  I hope it sounds okay and has a rhythmic flow.
• Date: 07/22/2009
• Tags: mirror girl selfhate scars hurt

I looked in mirror, only to see
A girl I didn't love
Staring back at me

She wore baggy shirts and and tight jeans
Didn't wear makeup to cover anything
Only the scars were to be seen

She's laughing at herself
Pretending it's all okay
Acting as though she's not all by herself

Her life isn't over
But she wishes it was
For that I hate this girl
And all that she was

Comments

[FierceGirly]

wow i love this as i do many other poems but this is quite great i would read this to my friends to make a point!and thts sumthing coming from me!

[BatzLove]

it sounds fine. i like it alot. to admit u dont like what u see takes alot of strenght. ^^ its really nice.