Lost

• Artist: All Hope Is Totally Gone
• Description: A couple days ago on the news i heard a girl got buried alive, and at first i was like oh well thats sad....but then the song purity by slipknot made me write this....rate me 1 star if you want i never wrote a poem in my life =]
  Oh and its not on the exact person this is more of like somebody in my head...
• Date: 07/21/2009
• Tags: beneath buried news girl dieing

I'm fine one day
lost another
someone find me
Why even bother
Why can't I die
I'm stuck down here
As the years pass by
I'm buried here
Stuck in fear
I scream for help
but no one seems to care
You walk over me
Is this even fair
Eating what I can find
Can't get this out of my mind
This is so impossible
I make it through another day
Falling apart
While my surroundings decay
Is this a nightmare
Can't remember the day I fell
I want to love and share
But instead I rot in this hell
I need to find peace
Not an easy thing to do
It's a big dive
So until then
I wait for somebody to arrive
While I lay here..........buried........alive

Comments

[Sky62forever]

I think that it's beautiful. You could feel the real sentiments of it, even without the explanation in the description. Never wrote a poem you say, how is that possible? I asked myself. In all my short 16 years, I have never, then, seen such raw writing talent. Write, write more and again, capture the feeling and the reality of everything.