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He screams my name,
But it's already too late.
My life was already over,
Far before this strike of fate.
The pain that I had carried,
Was always too much to bear.
Everyday I was reminded,
That life was never fair.
When he came along,
I thought he was the one.
When the rain had cleared,
He was my shining sun.
I thought he was my prince,
The one who'd die for me.
My plan of being saved from dieing,
Just wasn't meant to be.
I watch from above,
As they swarm like tiny ants.
Alive and well as always,
A teardrop falls to my pants.
I contemplate again,
My point for living life.
Was it really worth,
Taking all this strife?
I'm over the bars now,
Awaiting the leap.
For me to sink from existence,
Like a final sleep.
He screams my name again,
This time I hear the words.
Fluttering around my head,
Like a flock of birds.
I turn around,
And there he stands.
His arm outstretched,
Reaching for my hands.
All at once,
The walls fall down.
I'm in his arms,
And all is shown.
I awake in a sweat,
As he lies by my side.
I know he's not perfect,
But he is so kind.
All is well,
As I lay down my head.
I close my eyes,
And sleep again.
- Title: What Am I Doing?
- Artist: Cary09
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Description:
Me and my boyfriend had been fighting a lot... I was having a down period... tee hee... and this is what came of it. I hope you enjoy.
Comments and constructive criticism welcome. - Date: 07/21/2009
- Tags: pain love suicide
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Comments (3 Comments)
- princessii101 - 08/07/2009
- This is a really great poem............... I guess something good does come all of our experiences after all
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- Cary09 - 07/28/2009
- ^_^ Thank you!
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- DoubleMintTwins18 - 07/25/2009
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I really like this. 5/5. I love poems like this, love, sacrafice, etc. Again, I really like it. Keep it up!
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