Isn't it

• Artist: EternityBby910
• Description: I just wrote this..litterally this is pure amiturity right here! Comment plz i need negs n posis so i can later improve my work!! No rudeness plz I am just a simple amiture in begining don't hurt my feelings...cuz my feelings attack bak :) ty enjoy ur reading
• Date: 07/14/2009
• Tags: isnt love

Isn't it awkward,
how everytime you see me you stop and stare
Like I'm some freakshow
Ment to be scary ment to be weird
It's just how I am
Isn't it awkward,
How'd you tell everyone to stay away from me
Like I have rabies
Ment to be rabid, to attack and infect you with a disease called
Independance
Isn't it awkward
how'd you just sit and look at me, quiet intensity
Never moving your eyes
Studying my face, my hair, the shape of my nose
Isn't it awkward..
How you finally got the courage to ask me out after our first touching moment
days later when you could finally understand your emotions
Isn't it weird
How after we'd spent years together
Through separation
Making long distance work, calling eachother at first sight of a break
Isn't it weird
How much you love me
You'd do anything for me, and you pronounced that love with a ring
When we were still young promising to take my hand when we became of age
You kept that promise
Isn't it strange
How when after we got married we never left eachother's side
and I love how you always comforted me when times got bad and worse
Isn't it strange..
How people fall in love
Isn't it though?

Comments

[Dragons Willow]

critique: spell check! and, if it's pertinent to the poem, punctuation is a friend....which is weird advice coming from me. 4laugh i like this tho! it's really sweet and sentimental. were it me, and it's not cuz it's you, i'd try to tie the beginning of the poem into the end; just to bring it all back around. does that make sense? anyways as i said, this was awesome! yays you for a first! keep working at it! 5/5