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you came in my life
nothing special was going on
but you were easy to talk to,
a great friend i could count on,
and a great companion when i needed you,
and when i was with you,
i felt as if sparks flew
we held a special relationship
not even i could explain what i was feeling
but there was one thing that i knew
you were more than a friend to me
and you meant everything to me
my whole life was you.
i loved everything about you
you were perfect,
wonderful,
and the one for me.
everything about you made me love you even more
each time we talked,
and each time i thought about you
but soon after,
our love reached a point
th climax-
when our love was greatest
and i couldn't doubt what i was feeling
but after that,
you would find someone else
and everything would be different
and we were never gonna have that spark between us anymore.
i would never know whether this was true love
or a simple blinded fantasy
created by my imagination....
- Title: My First Love
- Artist: Leslie246
- Description: I have had a lot of crushes and so i have therefore had my heart broken many times cause it turns out to be a simple fantasy but just when i thought that i found the one,my heart breaks again...right now,i'm just gonna live my life without having to like someone too much...</3 its kinda funny cause the same thing happens with all my crushes...
- Date: 07/04/2009
- Tags: first love
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Comments (3 Comments)
- beavisrose217 - 07/06/2009
- It has a lot of pathos, but it sounds repeditive at the same time. I would condense a lot of the stuff you repeat and go into more detail about it.
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- mikid_18 - 07/05/2009
- Oh, leslie...i'm so sad that ur hurting like this...
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- cabbage_patch_doll_xoxo - 07/05/2009
- awwwww
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