Suicide

• Artist: Tausill
• Description: hmmm.. it came from my head.. i also like to try it but, something inside keeps telling not to do it.. so i just made a poem bout it.. hope you like it..
• Date: 06/02/2009
• Tags: suicide

I rush to the bathroom and lock the door,
I can't stand the pain; I can't stand it anymore.

I go to the cabinet for that lethal pill,
Knowing that this one will help or kill.

My parents received the letter of suicide,
They're wondering if their son is now dead or alive.

They pounded and pounded and said, Open the door.
I said, No!! You do not have your STUPID son anymore.

They said, Why, son, are you doing this?
I said, I F*CKIN love you and blew them a kiss.

I took the pill, then my life started to dim,
My chance for survival was really slim.

The door flung open with tremendous power,
This was such a terrible hour.

Why did I have to end my life?
Why did I cause them strain and strife?

Something was wrong inside my head,
Sorry, Mom and Dad, your son is now dead.

Comments

[l Tsuna l]

wow.... so deap... so sad... a tear actually fell... 5/5 all the way~! T~T

[Sexii_Tasia014]

~That waz very good.~

[iiLoves-Crimeii]

WOW that was umm wow... thats so so s o sad it made me cry... crying

[Tausill]

hmmm.. i think.. it was what im going to do.. lately.. ty for the comment anyways..^^

[Madame Mortis]

Wow...just...wow. Don't try it. You'll just end up finding you don't like the concequence, but you wont be able to reverse it. This is really good. Just a question, but when you wrote this, did it just kind of come? Did all the words just kind of work themselves out real easy like and you didn't really have to think about it? 'Cuz it really seems like that. I'm not saying that's a bad thing, I do it all the time. The flow and timing is really even. Good work!!