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My scars have healed now,
I hope your's have toobut, neverless,they still remain
marked with an icy blue
help to pick me up, i'm falling,
help me to reach the sky,
help my dear friend, now don't you cry
I told you already, but once again,
I wont let you die
remember...the stories?
remember, the cheering, the laughter,the fighting?
no one can save you
no one can save you,
no one can save you
no one can save you
no one can save you
no one can save you now...help to pick me up, i'm falling,
help me to reach the sky,
help my dear friend, now don't you cry
I told you before, but I'll say it again,
I wont let you die
my scars have healed now,
I hope that you
will always remain
a friend that is true
you thought you could trust her, she was your friend
now, look at the broken hearts we must mend
help to pick me up, i'm falling down deeper,
help me to reach the sky,
help my dear friend, now I can't help but cry
You told me before, but remind me once again,
that you wont let me die
wont let me die
Now I am standing, and walking on air
the scars are all faded
but still are there.
- by Ellectric Eccentric |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/16/2009 |
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- Title: Scars
- Artist: Ellectric Eccentric
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Description:
a sort of poem, but it is really meant to be sung. Gaia is telling me that it has spelling errors, but I'm not listening :D Read My buddy Elizacookie's poem "broken", it explains more of what's happening. About a past friend.
please comment!
*remember, it's a song - Date: 05/16/2009
- Tags: scars friendship relationships depressing
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Comments (4 Comments)
- MsSmith1016 - 06/02/2009
- this is great a little...but a little bad...kinda both to me...cause some of it doest make since a little to me...sorry
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- Cottoncandyocbra3 - 05/29/2009
- I never got into dirty pretty so much. I don't feel it adds a lot to the actual poem, but I do like what you've done here. Not too bad, but some of the rhyming seems a bit forced.
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- datghettogurl - 05/23/2009
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dis iz kinda scary yo!!
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- elizacookie - 05/16/2009
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Ah, yes... I remember that... Ironically, I think that helped our friendship grow...
Yeah, anyways... It's really good. It describes the whole thing, really well
You have a right to be proud of it.
*hugs*
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