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Minute by Minute
Day by day
Tragadies happen
Time passes on
Dreams are shattered
Hearts are broken
Plans are disrupted
Time passes on
Memories fade
Words are lost
Condolences given
Time passes on
Tears well up
You were taken to soon
But time passes on
And so will I
- by CaptainSpaz00 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/09/2009 |
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- Title: Time
- Artist: CaptainSpaz00
- Description: In contrast to my other poem "This Poem has No Purpose" I wrote this about my cousins, both of whom died recently in an accident. It was a five-minute thing, so it's not amazing...but it says what I want it to.
- Date: 05/09/2009
- Tags: time
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Amber Skyes - 07/07/2009
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I'm sorry about your cousins.
As for your poem, I like it. But poems like this are much different from what I understand are the ones you usually write, and although the lines themselves are good (with several exceptions) it doesn't flow very well. - Report As Spam
- tobiwants2cookies - 05/16/2009
- again awesome poem dude sorry for not checking these out sooner again 5/5
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- Poppy Nightmare - 05/16/2009
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sorry, but i think ur should change it to Time passes bye
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- CaptainSpaz00 - 05/10/2009
- Dont feel bad for me...I miss them, and I feel like life sucks sometimes. But I dont want it ruining my life...they wouldnt want that
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- sexychalupas - 05/10/2009
- omg that is sooooooooooooo sad i feel so bad for u and ur cousins
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- Softball Gurlz - 05/10/2009
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i like this poem its true :]
sorry about ur cousins - Report As Spam
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