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quiet pages yet unturned
with patience i yearn,
one young hero i wish to meet
many bow at his feet,
in his hands lie men's fate
the story, oh how I wait
with his might
he will fight,
with his blade
a story made,
with his pride
all shall hide
the hero falls ill
he becomes quite still,
all come to mourn
the greatest hero yet born,
shaky as i look
it's the end of the book
- by ZimJordanJ |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 05/01/2009 |
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- Title: end of the story :D
- Artist: ZimJordanJ
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Description:
very bored felt like rhyming:D comment please i'm new to the writing arena :p
my story is short and to the point, every one dies, even the most important - Date: 05/01/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- gjsoglo - 05/03/2009
- luv the couplet! nice use of vocab
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- 4ever_lost in_ ur eyes - 05/01/2009
- not bad =] keep up the good work
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