Day less World

• Artist: wildflower2828
• Description: I submitted it in the fiction section but some people said it should be in the poetry section. I dont why I wrote it. It just popped up in my head one day so I wrote it down. COMMENTS, CRITASISM, ARE NEEDED! Im not sure if the reference image works.
• Date: 04/11/2009
• Tags: less world wildflower2828

Day less World

Here I sit, staring at the horizon,
watching the sun go down for the last time.
I sit thinking about my life, my family and my friends.
All the things I would miss.
A tear goes down my face.
Oh how I would miss them.
All the laughs we shared, all of the good times we had.
Those sweet memories.
I would miss them so.
I'm trading them all for the one I love.
He lives in a day less world, so shall I.
Here I sit, staring at the horizon.
Watching the sun go down for the last time

Comments

[firefox228]

yes, the reference image works. it is definatly mor of a poetry sort of peice. i like how it flows.