Death

• Artist: DuckieGirl16
• Description:
• Date: 04/08/2009
• Tags: death

Death cold and alone
Breath my name
Take me home

Don't leave me my friend
I need you so
Keep close to me
Take me with you

I don't fit in here
In this world so green
Take me now
Don't make me suffer anymore

If you love me dear friend
Then you will take me with you and not leave me alone

Comments

[Lunlulocklomenlu]

I didn't really like it. Too repetitive and not enough substance.

[Gerard_Ray_Frank]

its ok i guess...3/5

[puppyluv1298]

horrible no I'm just kidding with you it's actually really great I would never know how to come up with that I'm not great at writing things I can't write poems I can't write songs but I can write books but that's it but if you maybe added a little bit more than it could become a really great song anyways I hope you keep writing poems because your great at writing well later