Darkest Hour

• Artist: Azeria2011
• Description: I can't rhyme for the life of me. So every poem I write is free versed.
  It was randomly thought up. I thought it was pretty good. But I'll need someone to tell me it isn't... if they think it isn't good. ^.^
• Date: 04/06/2009
• Tags: darkest hour truly cares heavenly

~The darkest hour,
leaves a shadowy mark,
upon those that dare to venture forth.

A beacon of light,
shines through the night,
to guide the heavenly spirits,
that take away our pain.

A lone figure,
footsteps ringing,
in their ears.

They wonder if they,
can stop their loneliness,
long enough to find someone,
who truly cares. ~

Comments

[kii-chan-reloaded]

Its pretty good. Kudos 5/5
You dont need to rhyme though. i semi rhyme when i write so i didnt mind it

[Sapphire_Honuka_73]

wow