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He loves me, He loves me not
Would I feel the same?
Would I not?
Would I feel the same
If he were held were held
By another?
Probably not.
Would he care
If I were held by another?
Probably not.
So why do I care if
The love we once shared
Is no longer there?
- by maydaymouse |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/30/2009 |
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- Title: Does he care? (2)
- Artist: maydaymouse
- Description: Here's the 2nd version and again rate, comment and tell me what you think.
- Date: 03/30/2009
- Tags: care
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Ultima011 - 09/18/2010
- I've said once and I'll keep saying it until arthritis prevents me from typing: Great poem and keep up the good work. You write better than most of my friends who do poetry.
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- SakuraHaruno5121 - 07/11/2010
- Cool! 5/5 =)
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- Pro Amy Shiko1991 - 06/27/2010
- I can relate to that along with at LEAST 80% girls and women out there. Great job. 5/5
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- peacekitten65 - 07/14/2009
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That was great!
I think it's a story that's all too familiar to girls everwhere. - Report As Spam
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