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Girl: I walk around the school,
Wonderin' if you, Will finally look at me,
When you walk by in the hall,
I guess you finally see,
'Cuz when you called my name,
I thought it'd be the same,
When you say,
Boy: Hey girl what's goin' on?
You look all depressed today, Did you get in trouble again?
Man I swear,
One day your dad will pay,
Then I say,
Girl: No it's not that,
I just want to get away,
He's always putting me down,
And there is nothing I can say...
So you pull me close to you,
And you say in your cute little way,
Boy: Lets go somewhere,
Far away from here,
I can't stand to see you this way,
I will never let you go,
Please come with me,
So what do you say?
Girl: Yes,
I can't take this place anymore,
I try to live with it but that makes it hurt so much more,
I always said I would run away,
But I always end up staying.
Boy: Let's go,
No one will ever know.
So we ditch school and no one ever saw us again.
- Title: Run Away With Me
- Artist: LilJil
- Description: This one I wrote a while back when I wasn't so good at poetry. There are two people in this poem so I'll label them so it's easier to read.Please comment to let me know if I should add or take something away from the poem! Or why u liked it or hated it. Thanks for reading!
- Date: 03/29/2009
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Comments (5 Comments)
- 69Kameron - 06/06/2009
- Some spelling, punctuation, and grammar problems but overall it was appealing to read. It really shows human emotion, and compassion. 4/5
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- Little-Jil - 04/28/2009
- I loved it. It's exactly how I feel.
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- LilJilsSis - 04/06/2009
- Nice choice of words, I really like it. = P
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- LilJil - 04/04/2009
- no, i want to but i havent
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- bladegirl20 - 04/04/2009
- so did u actually run away then?
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