We Are The Sword

• Artist: x Solo Lobo x
• Description: about me and her, the sword is the symbol of it all.
• Date: 03/28/2009
• Tags: sword

i am the blade, the symbol of the renegade,
you are the hilt, without you i would become wilt,
alone we are weak, lacking of all technique,
together we are tough, we do tell no bluff,
we would perish without one another, we would quite easily smother,
when we are together, the weight of the world is light as a feather,
now we have a decison, it must be made with precision,
live alone and be frail, or together and always prevail?

Comments

[Fille aux Cheveux de Lin]

It doesn't flow very much, some words sound like they have *only* been picked for rhyhming reasons.

[Cherry Blossom Hottie]

this is the one I like!!!!

[Lizabite]

I like the plot, but it needs to flow more.