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When i walk by him
I feel invisible.
He doesn't see me,
Because I'm invisible.
I cry at night,
When I'm invisible.
I say,"Hi!",
Forgetting I'm invisible.
He walks on by,
Because I'm invisible.
This is my super power,
Being invisible.
I wish it would be gone,
But it's still here.
It'll never be gone,
For that I fear.
The only good things to me,
Are invisible.
~cupcake
- by cosmic_grl_102 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/17/2009 |
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- Title: Invisibility
- Artist: cosmic_grl_102
- Description: i wrote this about how i feel about my boy friend, but i wrote this BEFOR he asked meh out, so yea! not one of my best, but ppl seem to lyk it, so yea! enjoy and plz rate and/or comment! ^.^
- Date: 03/17/2009
- Tags: invisible josh love pain
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Comments (6 Comments)
- cosmic_grl_102 - 04/12/2009
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NO! Cindy i meant lyk when him and Gaspar were going out!
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- CindyChasesGhosts - 04/11/2009
- wait....if this was about josh.....before he asked you out....so you we're actually flirting with josh when i was going out with him????? gawd....most of this is a lie.....your always hyper around him.......i barely had time with him.....meany face
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- summer1412 - 03/29/2009
- It's pretty good, I'm not personally a fan of the love fodder poetry, but for that, it's good. However, I wish the grammar in your poetry would get translated into how you type all the time. It murders my eyes when you type lyk dis. >.o;...
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- quhipped cream - 03/22/2009
- weird.
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- cosmic_grl_102 - 03/18/2009
- no duh!
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- CindyChasesGhosts - 03/18/2009
- awww!!!! its josh, isn't it xD
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