just a man

• Artist: -sanae-no-omoi-
• Description: this is something i did describing a character i made maybe when the story is finished i'll post it too vote fairly this poem means alot to me
• Date: 03/06/2009
• Tags: just

names written in the air, scarring the sky
so many names but none of these names belong to you
i search and search but my heart remains empty
i remember you and these wretched fellings stir

they called you a monster saying you'd kill
as the pain in your heart continues to grow
i simply want to run straight to you

i search for your name but the emptiness grows
time passes and this river of pain flows

hatred shouted, fear showed
for you there seems nowhere left to go
i do not hate you
i do not fear the blood on your hands
to me you are no monster
just a man

Comments

[-sanae-no-omoi-]

harsh if you looked at deeper meaning you'd think it was better

[charlotte_loves]

Learn how to spell, is the number one rule. Or, atleast reread before you post this entry. I don't think this poem should be called just a man, Because when you added that little sentence, it messed up the whole entire poem.