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Dreams of You
Day and night I dream of you,
Whether clothes are red or blue.
I may not know were you are,
But I know you can't be far.
Oh, how I long to know your name,
And if I met you I'd feel the same.
I know we are a lot alike,
But I wonder what you look like.
I know you're really out there,
And I'll find you, somewhere.
One day, after we've met,
We'll watch the sun set.
- by Adonis-Magi |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/27/2009 |
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- Title: Dreams of You
- Artist: Adonis-Magi
- Description: A poem I wrote for school in 6th grade. It got published in a book of young American writers.
- Date: 02/27/2009
- Tags: poetry love romanticpoem dream youngpoets
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Comments (3 Comments)
- babytaz_alyza - 07/11/2009
- cute! smile )
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- the_ashen_child - 04/02/2009
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love it!!!!!! i sometimes feel that way about friends too >< lol
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- Mizuki Ayu - 03/13/2009
- I like it a lot, very simplistic and beautiful. 4.5/5 (Rounded up to 5) only because you rhymed "alike" and "like." You have enormous talent and I think you should pursue writing more, personally or professionally. <3
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