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When i thought i could love no more,
You saw into my soul like an open door,
My life had been a complete disgrace,
Till you entered my heart with a loving embrace.
I'd never imagined any of this,
Your heavenly face, your warming kiss,
Or your hand desperately seeking mine,
And your gentle voice telling me everything's fine.
You always asked me your best feature,
But it's so hard to choose on such a magnificent creature,
i'd choose your eyes like a sparkling star,
Such a shame you live in a land from afar.
Now your leaving for Norway, to the land of snow,
My life again will be full of woe,
But as you're floating out on the sea,
Please always remember me.
xxx
- by Lonely-Elena-Forever |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/24/2009 |
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- Title: Come And Go
- Artist: Lonely-Elena-Forever
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i wrote this poem when i found my one true love ... im only 14, so dont think too much of it .... um, i hope you like it
i ain't a beggar, but feel free to comment if you want ... negative opinions are fine .. i like to know peoples honest opinions - Date: 02/24/2009
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Grand Shadow Wolf - 09/23/2009
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- jabawokeecoffewizard - 02/25/2009
- rubbish! Just joking. It's awsome rated 4! Baiz!
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- Sue GAlA - 02/24/2009
- Elena! I love your poems!
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- Lonely-Elena-Forever - 02/24/2009
- please commet people ... yay first comment lol !!!
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