Miserable Mystery

• Artist: DivineRain_Const
• Description: I take a great passion in writing but I know it's not very good. I tried my best, re editing it and re writing over and over. This is my final piece. Please be reasonable, I haven't been writing for very long. Thanks for reading.
• Date: 02/15/2009
• Tags: downfall attraction love enigma mystery

Mystified by your presence
Your words consume my breath
You are my gravity
You are my most vulnerable side

Startled by your appearance
Your have become my life
My heart forever revolving around you
Words cannot begin to describe

Intrigued by your habits
Lured in by your mysterious charisma
You leave me breathlessly speechless
I have developed a new insanity

This attraction to you...

Will it become my downfall?

Comments

[Brooklay]

Love it, don't turn it into a song, its amazing how it is.
You're really good, keep writing. 5/5
(:

[crazy_life247]

this is would be a great song if u just added more to it. 4/5