Can't Let You Go

• Artist: -Hoshiko-Tila
• Description: i moved a few months back and my boyfriend and i are having a tough time getting thro this and i wrote this for him im not sure if ill ever read or send it to him but he is my one true love please leave a comment so i know where i can improve. thanx
• Date: 01/22/2009
• Tags: cantletyougo

I can't let you go
your the only thing i know
you are my life my need
you help me breath

I've disappointed you in the past
but i refuse to let that last
i have thought it through
and i need to be with you

You ARE the love of my life
maybe i would like to be your wife
who knows what the future holds
sometimes i would like to be told

There are few things in life i know
but one things for sure i can't let you go

Comments

[Fo-eights Beach Fo-eights]

Phil was right, that line is funky and not the dancing kind.
Also
You're the only thing I know.

[twiliteen]

I think it is perfect. i dont think u need to change a thing. wish i was the author. Great Job.

[philelectricguitar]

It's good, except that:
you are my life my need
you help me breath
Doesn't quite seem to fit. Maybe of you split it into a few more lines, it might work better.