poetic tragidy

• Artist: Yami Yufakai
• Description: i wrote this to show how the world suffers from death, loss, war, and insaneness
• Date: 01/21/2009
• Tags: poetic tragidy

Pain dosn't hurt when its all youve ever felt, but it makes you go insane. Now it seems im dieing, and I have no time for crying. Here i lay, motionless in pain. I begin to think off what ive loved and what I knew.. and how its fading away now. Somwere someones lost, just the cost of this war in the world. Somewere a child is crying as its family is dieing. Somewere, in fact everywere some ones dieng, or simpley going insane. All the we are is just a poetic tragidy.

Comments

[kage kokoro 10]

Dang its been so long since i lost this account XD, my "yami yufakai" era was a good one

[xxBrunoMarsxx]

i like all of your poems there so good

[amythyst crystal]

all your poems sound like this world and you get people to feel this pain your poems are simply wonderful, sad, and beautiful bro!

[Fo-eights Beach Fo-eights]

The rest of it.
Somewhere, in fact everywhere, someone's dying,
or simply going insane.
All that we are is just a poetic tragedy.

[Fo-eights Beach Fo-eights]

You don't need to take my formatting advice, but you may consider me your personal spellchecker.
Pain doesn't hurt when its all you've ever felt, but it makes you go insane.
Now it seems I'm dying, and I have no time for crying.
Here I lay, motionless in pain.
I begin to think off what I've loved and what I knew,
and how it's fading away now.
Somewhere someone's lost, just the cost of this war in the world. Somewhere a child is crying as its family is dying.

[LittleMissNonaFaye]

Awesome and sad