Diary Entry 3# of little Renee

• Artist: vampiress_of_the_dark
• Description: Renee aged 11 having a hard time at home finally gets out of the house....
  
  this is fiction but can be true in some situations
• Date: 01/17/2009
• Tags: youre hurting

you came home and beat me
and broke my bones
didn't take me to doctor
until mum was coming home

i sit down tembling
nibbling on my nails
hoping you stop hurting me
but this hope always fails

she knows what really happened
but can't ever believe it's real
can't she see it's hurting me
these scars that never heal

my aunt takes me to a doctor
learns of my state at home
arranges with people
to take me as her own

my last words to my parents
were words worth spent
"These bruises and contusions
will remind me of what you did when I went!"

Comments

[sezuko]

its good love it!

[Starlight_Miss]

Yeah, I agree. And check your grammar. But I like it. 4/5. Please rate back.

[Rabid Ollo Bear]

It would be more impressive if you used proper capitalization.