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Closed Space...
An empty space is what I found. The light made it seem impossible to imagine. It was like hell and heaven. Rock’s was surrounding the shallow. Moss shining, spreading around the rocks. I looked up and saw heaven. When I looked down it felt like hell. Things seem impossible.
I went closer to the fresh moss. Touching it makes me feel alive. Smelling it makes me think of salt water. I listened, the harmony of water and birds sing made it sound so refreshing.
Insects was everywhere near the rocks. I looked closer, the insects was adorable. ‘Crack’ I looked behind me. Butterflies were looming around me. Different colours made the sky more colourful and bright.
Eventually, it was night. I found myself wanting to stay. Suddenly I remember my family. They are waiting at home for me. I took my bag and head home.
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- by steamyhappygrunny |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/14/2009 |
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- Title: dreaming a closed space
- Artist: steamyhappygrunny
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Description:
this is a weird poem about a girl/boy who is at the beach on a very very very hot day and slept around a shadey place and had a dream...
i was trying to describe a place... :} so if you dont mind please forgive me because i could not find the scene i was looking for ~TT.TT~ i have searched for an hour but still no sign so please forgive me....
the image down there is just the scene where the girl/boy slept @.@
thankyou for reading this ^^ - Date: 01/14/2009
- Tags: dreaming closed space
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Red_Rose_Fox14 - 01/25/2009
- thank you for commenting on mine!! I like yours! i founcions together well! good job!
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- lil sik ninja boiii - 01/23/2009
- excellent 5/5
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- hexcastersasuke - 01/21/2009
- omg this is awesome! i could really imagine the discription of the place! 5/5
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- Dear Elisa - 01/21/2009
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OMG! Steamy! This ish so awesome!
5 Stars! - Report As Spam
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