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• Artist: dreamheartnz
• Description: just another poem i wrote...
  tell me what you think... even if bad.. [but please tell me how to improve!]
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• Date: 01/10/2009
• Tags: love

I met you once
I miss you now
never was love
so profound

we met at the end of the year
we started something i hold dear
something with no end near
I need you baby, right here

These words are not enough
to express my love love all and all
nothing will do. I feel like a fool

I could write till the end of days
and still these words would not say
what i want them to in any way
but all you all need to know is
that i love you more than i can show

Comments

[Invisible emo chick]

awwwwww its so sweet. i have the same feeling for a guy that moved away

[myshatteredlittleheart]

i liked it a lot but in some places you axidently have a word that isnt supposed to be there like "all you all" and "love love" other then that,i thought it was great