can you see it or is it gone?

• Artist: char-char69
• Description: its a little poem that i wrote when i was dateing someone and its turned out very bad but this is what i hoped for but the anger inside of me tore it up and im not going to say a name so im going to put ****** for the name
• Date: 01/08/2009
• Tags: gone stayalive

Words wanting to come alive
comming back from where they thribe
with no where to go
and no where to hide
nothing to gain inside
but gaining freedom
where the words thribe
flash backs,remembering
where to go
where to hide
words wanting to come out
and want to stay alive
but with nowhere to go
and no where to hide
getting confuse inside
but the funny thing is
all that i remember and see
a flash back is you ****** you
because you see
you are very important to me
I Love You....do you love me?
but i cant see
so can you tell me
what i can see
so that i can believe you...,
what about me?
this whole earth is so very
confuseing as you can see
the only thing that keeps me here
is you...because if you werent here
i would be dead
no lie as you can see
all the scars and cuts on me
with so much anger inside
building up for over 10 years
as you can see all that anger
is now comming out of me
now your gone and is never
going to stay

Comments

[may you rest in hell]

i think its very good. <33