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Solemn lines of dancing cuts,
Dancing proudly across my wrist,
To live to die,
To cross the veil of meaningless lies,
Over to a land of pure thought and knowledge,
Follow me and see what I have seen,
You know you want to see it,
You know you want to hear it,
You know you want to,
So why don’t you?
- by Mutandanstan |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/02/2009 |
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Mutandanstan - 08/30/2009
- no, thats just you^^
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- WereSquishy - 08/29/2009
- >.> Pfft... and I got your pics under my pillow, we're even.
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- Mutandanstan - 08/26/2009
- lulz I gotz me revenge xD
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- WereSquishy - 08/26/2009
- Sorry for putting you down, those years ago. (months) I really loved your work, I just got jealous. Sincerest of all apologies, miluv.
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- Mutandanstan - 06/15/2009
- ^^thats what I like about it, and the fact that it just popped into my headums^^
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- dawnofthelight - 06/15/2009
- I like the personification of the cuts, and how you say "to live to die," as though the cuts paradoxically symbolizes a rise in the life of the person, yet helping a slow death. And the escapist feel of it ("to cross the veil of meaningless lies, over to a land of pure thoughts and knowledge" wink . ^^haha
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- WereSquishy - 05/25/2009
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Follow me and see what I have seen
Just sorta seems more along the lines of suicide. - Report As Spam
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