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Through the darkest of night
came upon an angel so bold
A most curious sight
for any to whom beholds
Her fair hair and mysterious eyes
prone to catch unwanted attention
even to catch the slightest of lies
the slightest glimpse relieves all tension
Large, vibrant colored wings
withholding several glistening plumes so pure
ten thousand times greater than any set of rings
beauty alone capable to lure
This most curious creature, calm and welcoming
found most easy to alter lives with the slightest touch
wide and open wings, never faltering
acting as that third crutch
Holding and supporting any being in need
no matter how different or special one may be
so free and pure untainted by greed
always by that cherry blossom tree
Though believed that anything pure is easily tainted
how a drop of ink stains white paper
she will also be permanently painted
yet none shall stink or taint, now nor later
For one so strong
only becomes from past experience
has had done wrong
but controlled any unwanted appearance
Gradually spreading those large wings
tightly wound around her
preventing, shying, hiding unwanted things
wrapped from head to toe to ensure
Loosening only bound to trust
in return a plume to behold
never to rust
a smile that told
After a few years
wings fully extended
even though she hardly shed tears
for scars burned unintended
Yet her smile always warming
she always spoke considering others
all emotions swarming
viewing others as sisters and brothers
Belonging nowhere, she creates her own place to stay
where others come under her widespread wings
joining the other curious ones that there lay
watching in that aerial garden where she comes to sing
Believed to be secretly spying
and yet she is fully aware
continuing to dance under the cherry blossom, flying
so beautiful in lace, so graceful as not to tear
Waiting to find the revealing
what makes her so different from the rest?
what is she concealing?
we appreciate and yet detest
Those wings of hers always open yet conceal
so many questions left unanswered for those to ponder
we go in search to reveal
yet left in the dark to wander
Why must she hide if so willing to accept
just hide in the dark like before
lose attention and act inept
lost at hope no longer to adore
....But wait, what would become of these borrowed plumes
to never have met one like her
nothing could ever compare to her perfect loom
even though once imperfect still secret per
She always smiles and holds wings wide for anyone to come
even though she is heart broken
no matter how slow or dumb
her life is more than just a golden token
Through that impossible blizzard she came
glided towards you as you trudged on
the pelting snow fell but just walking through, became tame
she comes over and wraps her wings around you, providing warmth upon
Always nearby when in need
watching everyone's life-holding loom
upon seeing an open wound she would try to see
she would carefully tend to it, leaving yet another plume
That most mysterious angel plays a melody upon her harp
from her heart and memories of others, she plays that calming tune, relaxing
by the river flowing freely, containing carp
under that weeping willow, memories that vines found trapping
That beautiful seraphim slowly becomes curious too
what would happen if I were to suddenly take leave?
all would be shocked to know and come to
at which would go to that maiden to retrieve
Watching wonderful mirage disappear into the horizon
all through the night wondering if it was all just a dream
waiting to find her walking while the sun was rising
then upon memory, finding that plume in your hand, much softer than the softest cream...
--Jaceil
- by angelicious0001 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/25/2008 |
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- Title: This Mysterious New Girl
- Artist: angelicious0001
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Description:
This was a poem that I wrote Christmas Eve of 2008
and I have been writing quite a lot of poems lately =]
oh well
This poem cannot be understood by people who think with their mind
they have to think with their heart
otherwise it turns into ashes and blown away
hopefully u will be able to see the meaning
and please comment
i don't mind criticism so feel free =] - Date: 12/25/2008
- Tags: mysterious girl
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Comments (5 Comments)
- angelicious0001 - 01/17/2009
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xDD no that aint what the poem is about xD
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- almax22 - 12/28/2008
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hmm... kinda reminds me of the relationship between u and me
i hope u don't go at the end
complicated but genius
btw do u think I deserve a plume from ya - Report As Spam
- piakat - 12/27/2008
- it sounded so inspired it`s really good
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- ilyix - 12/26/2008
- One word: beautiful. 4/5
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- Symbolon - 12/25/2008
- I'm not sure how to explain it- but I could feel it. It made me feel...I don't know- sad, maybe? But at the same time it was just the mystery that seemed to pervade, and the hope. It was- like a- a- symphony, maybe, like multiple parts blending, mood changing and yet staying the same. I liked it.
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