Lost Dreams

• Artist: XxdeadxnxgonexX
• Description: The one that left me broken, more so then anything, came up with the title.
  
  The poem its self is about when you fail at something so important, like love, life, trust, your dreams are shattered. Once you fail at something of importance you must walk through the Door. Where no goal or dreams lie. It is the End, the Sleep of Death.
  
  C&C Please.
• Date: 12/22/2008
• Tags: death failure dark dream

When I tried I didn't do well enough
I didn't try my best and now it's lost
Lost to me, forever more
My dream
I see the Door that waits for me
Standing there; glinting evilly
Waiting for me to step though
Step into the dark Sleep
One with no goals or dreams
One that lasts forever, one that no one sees
The Door is waiting for me
To fall into the Sleep of Death
Because it knows I have no more dreams
And dreams are my reason for life
So good-bye, dear friends
I love you all
Good-bye, farewell, I now must go!
Onto a place, where, I can't tell
Bet you that they call it "Hell"
My Dreams roam about
And I will never find them again
Like glass, they shattered
The broken pieces of my dreams
Flow around me
And fall silently to the ground
Leaving me in Darkness and Death

Comments

[Picturesque Honey]

i've read just about all of your poems and i loved them all, this one espically(5/5 on all), i have written a poem of my own i would love if you would look at it it's called Peaceful distance.

[Leslie2691]

I think it was well put together.