Sefl-less Enteraction

• Artist: -VaMpRiSs-MiRaNdA-
• Description: I made this last year in the winter. I had my heart shreaded. Many thought I was invisible. Just know I am here. I understand what you've been through. =^-^=
• Date: 12/14/2008
• Tags: seflless enteraction sadness

You cry and you pour.
You're shredded and torn.

You try to run but you can't hide.
The feeling is there deeper inside.

Love lost and hope gone.
A genuine frost and a groan.

Leave and stay away.
Your pain could be your freeway.

Self-esteeme punctures your heart.
Don't even think this is the start.

My point is coming.
Please don't stop running.

You counter the attack.
Yet you see it always comes back.

Heart to heart and brain to brain.
Do you know what the feeling is rain?

Keep quiet and stay still.
Cover up in your grandmothers quilt.

Thankyou for your love and kindness.
Now go tosleep my dear highness.

Comments

[charlotte_loves]

Its nice.
The title doesn't quite match up with the poem.
Otherwords,You have done an lovely job! keep it up ^-^
4/5 great effot,work,and amazing talent you have ^^

[Fox-Cruton]

This reminds me of Herman Hess poem 'Alone'.13 out of 10.- Fox.