Hypocritical, Stereotypical.

• Artist: Love Wounded Emo
• Description: I wrote this today. My mom is doing everything in her power to keep my girlfriend and I apart because she doesn't like her, for no reason, either. She doesn't know her at all, yet she hates her.
  
  I editted it for language (altered words are red.) The real thing can be found in my journal.
• Date: 12/13/2008
• Tags: hypocritical stereotypical

Oh, my God!
What's your problem?
Why can't you just die?
Just back off!
I hate you,
just fall, bleed, and cry.

It's not what she needs,
problems from you, too.
I need her, she needs me,
and now I don't need you.

What's so wrong with her?
What did she do to you?
Just tell me, JENNIFER!
WHAT DID SHE DO TO YOU!?

I don't CARE,
if you don't approve.
I stay with her,
I'm not gonna move.

I love her,
and want her always.
I hate you,
and wish you'd go away.

LEAVE US ALONE!
WE DID NOTHING WRONG!
YOU'RE A HYPOCRITE!
LOOK AT WHERE YOU CAME FROM!

I don't care what you say,
we'll see each other anyway.
I don't care what you think.
Your status just shrank,
Mother.

Comments

[miss-robin-batman27]

its not bad.
I gave it a 3/5.
It is a great concept.
but u might not want to involve real names.
un less that is fake.
but it is still a 3/5

[AmenthystMoon]

umm.....wow chris, i have no idea what to say.

[AmenthystMoon]

umm.....wow chris, i have no idea what to say.

[KittyKat127]

be prepared that you gf may leave instead. i've been through that before. just a heads up, i'm not saying that it will happen, but dont be surprised if it happens.
its okay, over time if you keep practicing, you'll make better poems. but make sure you keep writing! 3/5