Gone

• Artist: morefunthanneopets
• Description: in the 7th grade i had this crush of this guy named johnny and i really liked him but he bearly knew me and i wish we were going to be together 4ever but it didnt happened, he was already gone.
• Date: 12/11/2008
• Tags: gone hurt crush love pain

My heart is pounding everywhere, all day, for him.
I keep crawling to him, restless.
Never Ending Love.
..Until..
..I lose my grip..
..He's gone..
..I think about it, and it kills me inside..
..I dream about it, and it gives me nightmares..
..I ponder it, and it cuts me open from the inside out..
..but..
..I cant help it..
..Its there..forever..
..But it keeps coming back..
..again..again..again..and again.
No running, its faster.
No hiding, it will find you..
..always..
..and..
..forever..
..it's sad..
..but face the facts..
..he..
..is..
gone.

Comments

[RedWhiteBlack]

You have issues with punctuation. We don't put two periods side by side... you're looking for an ellipsis (...). It's kind of anticlimactic and I've seen it done before. 2/5