- The girl that i love.Is somewhere above.I can see her in my mind.I'm always on her side.I'll chase her like darkness on light.She's my dream.There's a lot she means.I love her more than anything!She's more than everything.With the end of world.I know with that girl.I'll make it out alive!She's my whole life...
- by Xxlove_lasts_foreverxX |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/28/2008 |
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- Title: My First Song Lyrics
- Artist: Xxlove_lasts_foreverxX
- Description: Well i always make lyrics and all so heres my first song i ever wrote about a girl i liked........so i hope you like it and remember this was only the first so please know that it won't be really good...and Thank You a bunch for reading... ^_^ oh lastly its not too long because it was my first and i didn't know how long songs were supposed to be =c
- Date: 11/28/2008
- Tags: song
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Infinity Of Shadow - 12/05/2008
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I likes yur lyrics..Yur lyrics can combine with this song :Hitohira no Hanabira by Stereo Pony..
Make another lyrics..
This song so awesome...^_^ - Report As Spam
- Xxlove_lasts_foreverxX - 12/03/2008
- thank you every1 =D
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- TOXiCKiiSS x - 12/03/2008
- honestly it sounds like a poem to me still good tho
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- The mad and the furious - 12/01/2008
- nice, i cant make up lyrics, i can only remember a song i like's lyrics XD
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- End~Moraine - 12/01/2008
- Too cliche.
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- emo0213 - 12/01/2008
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thats rlly good
wen u start to right longer songs try dividing it up into like verse 1 chorus
i dont mean type them but like put enter on them
like
verse verse verse verse verse
more verse more verse
chorus chorus
it just makes it easier to follow
but again rlly good
5/5 - Report As Spam
- Wet Mustache - 12/01/2008
- its an awesome song u should write more for gaia contests
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