Rewind

• Artist: zodiac virtues
• Description: I wrote this during fourth hour Merit English, my friend was bugging my to death so I decided to express myself through this poem, rather than beating him up.
• Date: 11/27/2008
• Tags: rewind

I walked the final steps...
butI couldn't find anything.
I counted down the seconds...
but I couldn't hear the clock.
I opened my eyes...
but I couldn't see my something.
What has happened
I do not know.
MustI reverse my steps to find,
I will.
ShallI open my ears and rewind the clock to listen,
I can.
Can I cut the sash around my eyes to see my something?
I must.

Comments

[Nevid21]

personily (miss spelled) i really liked it very cool, creative

[LadyRedEyes]

cool 5/5

[disney tv]

Not very good. I didn't like it, personally. It's not formatted well, either, and the lines through everything is very annoying to look at and smushes it all together. Your spelling is pretty bad, too. I understand how it might make sense in the author's mind, but I didn't understand it until I read your explaination.

[SakuraIchigoRyu]

Lovely. It really sounds good. I can't really describe a feeling about it. But it;s definitely better than my work.

[LenaKanaryMay]

Very cool 5/5

[zodiac virtues]

WELL IT WASN'T SUPPOSD TO BE EMO, THAT WASN'T HOW I MEANT IT, I MEANT IT TO BE A PERSON WHO COULDN'T LIVE LIFE AND WHO FOUNDTHE WILLPOWER TO. BUT IF THAT IS HOW YOU INTERPRET IT, WELL, OK.

[Viet Dollie]

very emo...like everything else.