Golden butterflies

• Artist: MakoxXxOkumura
• Description: this is for a good friend of mine...hope he and you enjoy it ^^
• Date: 11/12/2008
• Tags: golden butterflies

Golden sparkles of light, golden butterflies

Creating shadows cast across the skies

At vision's edge, so beautifully caught

Yet never there when pleadingly sought.

Fluttering wings, so vast, so deep

Pools of sunlight though rays do not meet

Isn't it like the silver moon's farewell?

As it cries when it does not hear sunshine's bells.

So lack of birds, free thought and light

And now a lack of simple sight

For the golden butterflies flutter fast

But it can't be real, only a dream of the past.

But what is dreaming, a visage of want?

Or some insanity that slowly haunts?

Whatever the hope, or reason it may be

These golden butterflies cloud my present to see.

I cannot see the present for they obstruct my every view

I cannot wonder the future as it comes so very soon

So I only see the past and the bright golden glow

Like the sun that never saw the moon or the twilight show....

Comments

[Espyyon]

i love it i didn't have to read the whole thing because it was so good biggrin

[290DarkStars]

its like you reached inside my head and put the vision in yourself! Well said! and seince I have wierd visions of unexplainable things, such as. But mine are more chaotic rather than peaceful, im fringin on either giving you 5/5 or 6/5. It reminds me of my past a little to much to be limited by sheer numbers. it reminds me of my poem "Go". ah well. 5/5, and please note that I would have given you a 6! mrgreen

[Tyki Miku]

I love this very much. You did a very nice job writing it. I don't think I would ever be able to write something with such expertize and your imagery is simply amazing. I hope you continue to write poems and send me them when you complete more =]