Dreamer

• Artist: Fushigi-No-Kaosu
• Description: Hello all. I am Fushigi No Kaosu and I have done poetry for a long time, but this is my first post here on gaia.
  I know there is a problem here, like most other places, with Art theft. for those of you who have doubts that my poems are mine, I have provided a link to the site I first put my Poems on. Not all of them are there, but enough to prove, I think.
  I would love to hear what you think, constructive criticism is appreciated. Please vote as well.
• Date: 11/11/2008
• Tags: dreamer poetry dark

Found in eternity, lost once again;
Waking in nothingness, dreaming in sin.
Steel eyes tell the tale of the years they have borne—
Ever in sorrow, forbidden to mourn.

Faith is a falsehood, forged only of ice,
A mockery to those who have lived the hard price.
You no longer fear that you will not survive:
The toil of your heart is to know you’re alive.

Time flows about you in eddies and waves.
Your tongue, turned to dust, cannot speak what it craves.
You have naught but tendrils of memory to find
The last lingering wisp of the choice left behind.

The plea of the haunted encased full in lead;
The cold brush of ageless eternity sped;
The price that you pay is to never be whole,
To exist with the knowledge that,
You once had a soul.

Copyright: AEB 2002
Fushigi @ Darkpoetry.com

Comments

[zombie_levmeister]

404 not found on the link.

[Choti01]

It's a good poem, but it's too bad you didn't write it. Do you know what plagiarism is? It's stealing. And you stole this from the real poet, who wrote it years ago. Shame on you for saying you wrote something you didn't!

[above_the_jade]

good good....

[minimel1]

1st I love the language you used biggrin