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ROSES ARE RED, VIOLETS ARE BLUE,
SUGAR IS SWEET AND SO ARE YOU,
BUT THE ROSES ARE WILTING, THE VIOLETS ARE DEAD,
THE SUGAR BOWL'S EMPTY AND SO'S YOUR HEAD.
KIND, INTELLIGENT, AND HOT,
THIS DESCRIBES EVERYTHIN YOU ARE NOT.
OF LOVING BEAUTY YOU FLOAT WITH GRACE,
IF ONLY YOU COULD HIDE YOUR FACE.
I WANA FEEL YOUR SWEET EMBRACE,
BUT DONT TAKE THAT PAPER BAD OFF YOUR FACE.
I LOVE YOUR FACE, YOUR SMILE, YOUR EYES,
DAMN IM GOOD AT TELLING LIES! XD
I SEE YOUR FACE WHEN IM DREAMING,
AND THATS WHY I ALWAYS WAKE UP SCREAMING.
MY LOVE YOU TAKE MY BREATH AWAY,
WHAT HAVE YOU STEPPED INTO TO SMELL THIS WAY?
MY FEELINGS FOR YOU NO WORDS CAN TELL
EXCEPT FOR THE WORDS "GO 2 HELL"
DONT MESS WITH MY LIFE, IT'LL BE A CRIME
IF YOU DON'T LISTEN, WELL......YOU'LL JUST DIE.
- by redrosefire44 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/09/2008 |
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Comments (7 Comments)
- lolzer09 - 07/23/2009
- i like it
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- UncoolWalrus - 04/09/2009
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the caps D:
the ending duzznt go into the rhyming sceam - Report As Spam
- SmileCute12 - 12/07/2008
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ok first off it was pretty good
something that ruined it for me...was the caps lock
if u want to make it look more interesting color it or something, but dont caps lock or it will look really newbish
well anyway it was pretty good i guess
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- The Kuro-oni - 12/07/2008
- Very interesting look upon the darker side of love.
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- kelcy808 - 12/06/2008
- haha
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- CrimsonAngel6x6x6x - 12/04/2008
- Sounds Like My Love Life......
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- Hikaru Kagi - 12/04/2008
- hey girl not to be mean or anything but it kinda looked like u copied my friends poem and added stuff to it and that kinda plagerizin(hope i spelled that right)
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