too late

• Artist: Ms Make Me Smile
• Description: a poem about how i changed as a person and im going to change back, count on that. thanks to everyone who comments and rates
• Date: 11/06/2008
• Tags: late

im losing it
the person i once was
the eyes of innocence
that once laid upon my face
the face of those who i calll friends
no longer see what they once saw

the words of kindness i sope
have changed to words of
bitchyness and cruelty

never agian will i have it
never again will i have the bliss of
ignorance of what existed
the looks of kindness have changed
to looks of anger and regret

i changed but realised
too late
too late to turn back
too late to fix things

despite all
i will attempt to change
but even doing this
i will be too late to change
too late to atone

too late for forgiveness
no more nice
no more joy
just the shadow of what once was myself

Comments

[iChemical-kiss]

; ^ ; 5/5~!!! that was awesome ness, Rate me? biggrin DD

[Ms Make Me Smile]

thanks for rating

[Melania Cullen]

nice.....take luck with the changing back....trust me, its hard to do, but it is totally worth it when you pull through, be yourself and be you!!!

[Ms Make Me Smile]

thanks im glad you liked it

[lilli1220]

nice idea but it doesn't flow

[Kattui]

nice poem ^^ I hope you can change back, but I think it's best when you just be yourself 3nodding good luck anyways ~_^