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When you came to me,
I couldn't even see,
What was going to happen,
In the torrent of my heart..
I stood and tried to see,
As you pried my soul free,
From its earthly bearing,
And examined it part by part..
What were you to be,
Just another girl to me?
I just could not breathe,
Suffocated.. by the torrent of my heart...
- by ArchangelTsuya |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 11/02/2008 |
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- Title: Torrent
- Artist: ArchangelTsuya
- Description: I don't usually write poetry, especially not a love poem.. but I thought I might give it a shot, my rhyming. I don't even know what to call it or what the rhyming scheme is lol.. I just wrote it from the heart.
- Date: 11/02/2008
- Tags: torrent
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Comments (7 Comments)
- ArchangelTsuya - 11/09/2008
- Yay for comments =) I'm going to submit some song lyrics soon as well <3
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- StarlightCrescent - 11/07/2008
- nice poem smile
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- Lord earth_angel_0770 - 11/03/2008
- ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!nice!i like it!
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- ArchangelTsuya - 11/03/2008
- I didn't think it was so good XD
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- xXoX--S--XoXx - 11/02/2008
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aaaw n_n wow , thats a realy nice poem x
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- Living Murder Victim - 11/02/2008
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Whoa, amazing poem Pelly. o.o
Didn't know you could write so well~~ - Report As Spam
- iShnuggy - 11/02/2008
- o.o woah... Nice...
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