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o how my heart exploded
as she walked down my street
it was her- yes- her!
the one with the dark hair
and the mysterious eyes that strolled past me
i knew my life had changed, for this feeling was new
as she looked upon me, i froze
it was like something strange- like an arrow that had peirced my soul
dear lady,
the dark one in my dreams
are you part of reality?
are you a siren? maybe a queen?
or is it i that is part of imagination?
for it seems you walk right through me.
- Title: Almost Noticed
- Artist: tevamaki
- Description: uh....cookie?
- Date: 10/30/2008
- Tags: almostnoticed
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Comments (3 Comments)
- animewolf16 - 03/29/2009
- This is good
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- a horrible monster - 03/29/2009
- Interesting, better than a lot of poems on the site. Continue to experiment!
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- Revolution Imminent - 10/30/2008
- It's cute. I couldn't bear to get nit picky about this one.
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