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Would we still be friends?
Or would you hate me for the rejection?
Would you try again?
Or would you give up completely?
Would you say you kidding?
Or would you act totally serious?
Would you have secretly admired me?
Or would you have secretly despised me?
Would we still be friends?
Or would we stand where we are now?
- by i_hate_kung_fu_frogs |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/27/2008 |
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- Title: If I had Said "No"
- Artist: i_hate_kung_fu_frogs
- Description: just a poem i made up after me and my boyfriend broke up...
- Date: 10/27/2008
- Tags: broken heart
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Comments (5 Comments)
- unfixable_14 - 10/28/2008
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if only they actually answered these questions lol
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- Taya_TnT - 10/27/2008
- I like the point and where the story is comming from, like it's a very good subject, but definetly needs some work smile
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- Lex2442 - 10/27/2008
- hmmm.... i like the way there is a pattern but i think it needs work.. <3
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- Lex2442 - 10/27/2008
- hmm its to stable...it should be catchy....like...a ryme or something.... it's good but needs some work
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- Krxmer - 10/27/2008
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Very nice.
Keep it up
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