Broken Heart Lost Again

• Artist: Pingiwin
• Description: Ever been broken hearted?
  Sucks don't it. You feel so lost and so unaccepted by everyone around you.
  You feel like no one around you cares any more, and no one wants you.
  Everything in this poem talks about how sometimes a broken heart can be
  broken by a drunk...
• Date: 10/26/2008
• Tags: broken heart lost again

You know your lover
You know their touch
You wish that one day
they'll just hush...

One night
After that day
You just wonder
what would happen
after that horrid fight today...

So much booze
and too many lives lost...
A lovers heart broken again
in a matter of seconds
after that night...

The love you shared
thrown away in the dusk

The kisses, the hugs,
everything down to the little
finger tip touch...
Down the drain till the tears drawn
toward the pain...

Pain gain from the heart without the soul..
Love to spare...
but no love to give...
A heart break
to the end...

Comments

[Pingiwin]

I write mostly free verse and couplets lol
it's just how it was posted on there... ^_^ lol

[Syra_Anna_Belle]

I like the emotion and imagery you use... you might want to look at your format though... you start with a ABCB rhyme, the ABCDB, then you loose all rhyme. Also stanza 4 seems a bit short to fit in with the rest of it... but it is a beautiful poem, that's just a suggestion....