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A VICIOUS CYCLE
Oh, how I wish, every day, to forget you.
I pray to my gods every night, bid them erase you completely from my heart and soul and mind.
Yet every dawn I wake to kneel at your feet yet again.
How I wish and hope to forget the sight of your face, transformed into a glowing deity in your love for me.
How I wish and hope and dream to erase the heady seductive scent of our love from my dreams.
How I dream and pray to blur the sound of your voice, cooing constant lies of love everyday.
If only my heart would stop tormenting with constant reminders of how you, the one who promised never to hurt me,
Deserted me in my time of need.
You ,who promised to be different, the one who bled me dry, the one who will not leave me alone.
You. The lying love of my life.
You gave me a taste of heaven, then ripped it away in one heartless blow.
Now, I cannot even give my tattered heart to another, for fear that it should disappear completely.
I was betrayed and shocked, I withered in these feelings until the day I saw the light.
I took these feelings and compressed and corrupted them, turned them into a great furnace in my soul.
I threw into it my feelings of love for you, blackened them, hammered them, altered them.
They rose anew, as clear as diamond. This feeling lies in the center of me now.
It ismy banner and goal. Yes! Where there was once love for you, there is now only HATRED."
- by LoveLustDeseo |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/22/2008 |
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- Title: A Viscious Cycle
- Artist: LoveLustDeseo
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Description:
Umm....it's a poem I wrote when i was feeling very blah...and nobody better steal it! I TRADEMARK IT TO ABBI ONTIVEROS RIGHT HERE AND NOW. but its an all me poem, def. And I would appreciate CRITISCISM...not flamers. Thank you.
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you can find the unedited version in my journal. - Date: 10/22/2008
- Tags: viscious cycle heartbreak anguish
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Comments (5 Comments)
- R1R1H2 - 04/08/2009
- This is one of the best i've ever heard. You should look me up and add me as a friend. I'm a poet myself. I also know that feeling. I actually wrote a poem like that, well not exaclty, but the message was there.
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- Hott_izzy96 - 12/18/2008
- Hey i love it.....its really nice....i went through something like that too.......love it....
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- Tasogare Megami - 10/22/2008
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WOO HOO! wink
BRILLIANT! 3nodding - Report As Spam
- Summer Fallwinterspring - 10/22/2008
- This isn't a poem.
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- a classy broad - 10/22/2008
- Needs more candles imo!
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