The dark

• Artist: O R L Y B B Y
• Description: I made this poem to say,
  that dark and night are different.
  The dark is were its pitch black,
  But the night has stars, and the moon.
  It can guide anyone or anything.
  I hope you like this.
• Date: 10/03/2008
• Tags: dark

The dark is scary;
What a disgrace the dark brings,
It comes from that room,
that has no light,
It comes from that hole, thats small,
and with no light,
Nothing to guide your path,
Nothing to help you see;


The night, it's beautiful,
It's not scary,
It's full of creatures big,
and small
The night has a guide;
It has a light,
a bright and beautiful light;

Stars make that night beautiful,
It will never be dark without that light,
That light is graceful,
It guides us when needed,
We will always love the night,
cuz' thoughs stars are needed.

Comments

[Paintwiththewind]

good poem. but the thing that bothered me is "its" it is supposed to be it's. please use proper grammar.

[Quzo]

Pretty decent poem and yes, the night is different to darkness. In much the same way as light is different to the day I guess. Darkness means there is no light where as night just means 'the sun is in bed'.